Disch's review was an abominable piece of writing for two reasons--1) It never told what Clark himself thought of Olson; 2) It hardly dealt with the actual merits, or lack thereof, in Olson's writing.
I could hardly believe, for example, that anyone, let alone a poet who has published seven books of poetry as has Disch, would think such alleged facts as Olson's never doing the dishes for his common-law (O God, how immoral!) wife, or Olson's seeking a draft deferment during World War II, are apt criteria by which to judge his poetry. . . .
At his best, Olson was a lyric genius--an appellation that Disch seems to treat with unmitigated scorn--who wrote out of genuine American experience in a language that rolled, stammered and dropped off abrupt cliffs of silence with absolute fidelity to his own breath flow and native idiom.
That is a feat that many poets can appreciate, though perhaps not Disch, who seems to concern himself more with the number of times Olson was unfaithful to his common-law wives.
GERALD NICOSIA, MANHATTAN BEACH