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O Come, All Ye Fearful

A Chance Redemption With a Stranger in the Dark

December 03, 2000|CATHERINE L. KEEFE | Catherine L. Keefe lives in Trabuco Canyon. This is her first piece for the magazine

THIS MAY SOUND LIKE A STORY ABOUT FAITH, BUT MOSTLY IT'S ABOUT mistrust and fear. Not the kind of fear big enough to scream over. I'm talking about the slow-moving variety that makes me squeeze my soul and lips tight, like the clasp on a granny's purse, until I don't recognize me anymore.

To the beginning, 16 days before Christmas. I pull into my driveway. It is raining. Night. No one is home. No light is on.

I have a trunkload of groceries. Four and a half minutes separate my ranking as either good mom or bad. I lose if I'm late to pick up my daughter from ballet class across town.

A rustling on the wall that divides my home from my neighbor's startles me as I open the trunk.

"Hey!" says a stranger, a young man jumping out of the shadows. He hops over the wall and drops two feet from my toes.

"Hey," he repeats, as if maybe I didn't hear him. See him. Already have time to wonder what he is doing materializing from the storm like this at 8:30 at night.

He talks fast, like he's used to getting shushed.

"I'm not looking for charity, see, I'm just trying to make a better life for myself, see, all's I've got to do is sell magazines, get to 15,000 points and I've earned my way, see, I only need 300 more points and your neighbor, Ron, he just asked me in for cinnamon rolls and bought a magazine and all I need is 300 more points and I've earned my way. Do you want to buy some magazines? Say, is that McDonald's in there? Something sure smells good for dinner. Did you go to McDonald's?"

He pauses for air, this stranger. He flashes big, clean white teeth at me.

I lean in, trying to smell cinnamon on his breath. I search for crumbs or icing smudges on his lips. He is dressed in a well-knit sweater, navy blue pants, heavy boots. He has that wide, wide smile.

I turn away. Walk up the steps to the porch, to the shelter. It is still dark.

He follows.

I never buy anything from doorway solicitors, I prepare to tell him. I am listening to that voice in my head that gives me permission to be rude and suspicious in the name of safety. Besides, I already have six subscriptions to magazines I don't read. They were bought from my children as school fund-raisers.

The children. It's a good thing they're not here to see their mother so foolish as to lead a man onto our porch who jumped out of the night. It's a good thing they won't see me be heartless just 16 days before Christmas.

I pause, keys clutched in my hand, ready to use as a weapon.

"Sure, I'll help you out," I say.

This startles both of us.

He smiles again. I see no cinnamon streaks. I look into his deep brown eyes and catch a straight gaze.

"Let me just give you $20," I say, glancing down at my purse. I am not following those eyes into any sort of trust.

"Oh no, ma'am," he says, shaking his head. "They won't let us take money. No cash. You have to buy a magazine subscription. You can pay by check. Boy, that food smells good."

I blink. It's never enough. I've already leapt off the cliff of prudence, talking to this man alone on the porch in the dark, and now I'm feeling guilty because I'm not giving him my dinner and I don't want to give him a check. There's a lot of information on a check. My name. Phone number. Address. Signature.

My credit information was stolen once. Some lady was charging up jewelry at JC Penney and televisions at Circuit City and calling herself me. I didn't find out until I went to buy a new house and discovered my credit report was soiled with dozens of delinquent accounts for tens of thousands of dollars. The police traced the theft to a ring of credit thieves working at a car dealership, where I had written a check as a down payment. It took two years to clear my name.

No, I can't give this stranger a check. I blink again. Tomorrow I'll start to be a more trusting person.

"Let me see what magazines you've got," I say, surprising us both again. He replies with that wide smile, all teeth. I wonder if it's the good fortune of not being turned away, or the thrill of having duped me.

I open the front door and turn on the porch light. We stand like moths, hovering in the circle of light, not in, not out.

"I am really late now," I say, flipping through a phone book-size listing of magazines and prices all written in tiny type. I tell this stranger I'm in a hurry because I have to pick up my daughter, and then he asks where she is and I imagine he's gauging how long I'll be gone so he can steal all the presents piled under the tree.

"Man, your neighbor, Ron, sure is nice. Man, those cinnamon rolls were sure good," he says, rubbing his sweater with his big hand. Grinning. Again, I lean closer, trying to smell cinnamon. I size him up. Me versus him. I'm not sure who would win.

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